3/02/2013 - 
Writing challenges
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Writing challenges
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Writing Challenge #2: "The Voice of the Town"
Time for some serious work guys! You have a mission to accomplish. Here it is:
After the recent elections, the new town council has decided to make our town a better place. Towards this direction, they have decided to assign citizens an active role in the process of the reformation. Your mission is to go around the town and inspect four places where young people can hang out with friends and spend their free time. Do you think they are enough or is the town in need of more? Write your reports, describing the facilities of each place, commenting on the good and bad points and recommending improvements (120-180 words).
After the recent elections, the new town council has decided to make our town a better place. Towards this direction, they have decided to assign citizens an active role in the process of the reformation. Your mission is to go around the town and inspect four places where young people can hang out with friends and spend their free time. Do you think they are enough or is the town in need of more? Write your reports, describing the facilities of each place, commenting on the good and bad points and recommending improvements (120-180 words).
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Hello everyone!!! I think Pyrgos is a great town.It contains to us that we need.There are many shops,cafés and many amazing beaches!
But these are not enough...In all over the town there are many disgusting rubbish out of the dumpsters.Many citizens are sick because there are dangerous illneses and microbes.
This is some advice which can help our town to be better :
1.We mustn't be so overconsumptions
2.We can would rather bikes than cars
3.We can plant lots of trees , for more oxygen
4.All we can do recycling
5.All the people and the local organisations should go to our major and tell him about the horrible situation in our town.
A week ago i saw a facebook page which its name is <>....When i saw this i felt really fool......
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Hello everyone!!! I think Pyrgos is a great town.It PROVIDES US WITH WHATEVER we need. There are LOTS OF shops,cafés and ALSO SEVERAL amazing beaches!
But these are not enough...There IS A LOT OF disgusting rubbish out of the dumpsters all over the town. AS A RESULT, A GREAT NUMBER OF PEOPLE are sick because there are dangerous illneses and microbes.
HERE is some advice which can help our town to be better :
1. WE SHOULD NOT CONSUME SO MANY THINGS
2.We WOULD RATHER USE bikes than cars
3.We COULD plant lots of trees, TO GET more oxygen
4.We SHOULD all recycle
5.All the people and the local organisations should go to our mayor and tell him about the horrible situation in our town.
A week ago I saw a facebook page CALLED "Pyrgos : the most unsightly town in the Peloponnese".
When I saw IT I felt HORRIBLY...
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